I think you need to crop the photo to move your object (the old man) from the middle to the left. This way, there will be more movement in the photo as the viewer follows the gaze of the man. And of course, that plastic bag will also conveniently disappear :)
Nov 18, 2009 Rating
Punch! by: Anonymous
Actually, I take that back. I think it needs nothing. You have wonderful detail, exposure looks fab. Consider me RETRACTED!
Nov 18, 2009 Rating
PUNCH! by: Anonymous
I would punch up the contrast to make the blacks and whites more distinct. It's a very good picture, but I think a punch to the contrast would make it even better.
Sep 18, 2009 Rating
Good pic by: Teresa
Good capture, great emotion. The only thing I see that I would change is the bag in the background. If you could take this out, this photo would be perfect.
Sep 18, 2009 Rating
Thinking of.... by: Janice
I like this picture. You captured the mood perfectly. I don't see anything wrong with it.
